First Cut Feedback

Today, myself and my group presented the first cut of our film to our media class. The feedback that we received was mainly positive

We were told that we'd made good progress with our editing by adding effects to our shots that enhanced them effectively, the group also commented on our soundtrack that we imported and said that it flowed effectively within the scenes.

One person said that they liked the way that the kitchen scene contrasted with the forest scene; they said it worked effectively as you don't expect the plot to twist from such a normal, mundane atmosphere to a life or death situation.

We used a "white noise" sound effect twice in our film to introduce different scenes in a slightly alternative way; this was received well by our class with lots of people saying it worked effectively.

However, we did receive some constructive criticism; some said that scene one; the scene within the kitchen dragged on for too long and grew dull. Because of this feedback, we will consider cutting down the scene wherever it is possible.